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Started by kaeguree Sep 01 2019 12:27 AM

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just before release...

 

https://youtu.be/PLBd1J-V4dY

 

how about this? 



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Looks nice!

Good job!!

 

Better sprites for the enemies?

 

Don't know if the map is clear enough (everything looks better in device though).

 

I would reconsider the name.

Smoke reminds me of smoking.

English is not my first language so I could be completely wrong.

Probably nitpicking, I would like to read more opinions about this!

 

Also the virtual d-pad could be replaced with swipe controls.

In video sometimes I don't see the d-pad so maybe you have already done it :).



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I like it. I agree smoke sounds bad to me, but the game looks great. Can't wait to try it.



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Thank you for the comment.

 

I should think about what the title is going to change. I am not also native speak.  

(if you have any ideas, would you let me know about it)

 

and swipe control is added. your guess is correct.

 

more graphic resources, i want always.

but i'm developing games by myself, so it was not easy to make more images.

maybe at the next version, i can add 



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The only name I can come up with sounds bad but that is why my 13 year old mind always goes. "Fart Car". I like the graphics for what it is worth.



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The only name I can come up with sounds bad but that is why my 13 year old mind always goes. "Fart Car". I like the graphics for what it is worth.

 

"Fart Car" was the original name of this game.

 how do you know ? :)

 

 As i didn't know the feeling of the fart in English, I changed. 

 

 

 is it better the name of "Fart Car"?  will i try?  :D



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released on AppStore...

 

the title of game is changed into "Fart Car"

 

Fart Car

 

Android version is waiting for review..



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At last, released on PlayStore.

 

Fart Car

 

 

I hope many people enjoy this. 



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Title changed to "Skunk Car" (in English)..

 

and fully changed.

 

 

 

 



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Just a friendly piece of advice: we are almost all developers here, we are not your audience.

 

I understand that it may feel natural for you to post here with product updates and such, but these posts don't really help all that much. You won't drive traffic to your game(s) from these kind of posts.

 

The people on these forums are more interested in the actual development process, the initial release, as well as post mortems of your games. All I'm really trying to say is that you are trying to sell your game to people who are trying to sell you their game. They are more interested in the development of games and in selling their own games than in buying anyone else's games.


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This looks very similar to "New Rally-X" that I remember from long ago.

The music was very memorable. Something similar might work well.



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This looks very similar to "New Rally-X" that I remember from long ago.

The music was very memorable. Something similar might work well.

Yes, you're right. 
The motif of this game is "Rally-X"

 

The difference is that you'll drift and see more enemies.



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Just a friendly piece of advice: we are almost all developers here, we are not your audience.

 

I understand that it may feel natural for you to post here with product updates and such, but these posts don't really help all that much. You won't drive traffic to your game(s) from these kind of posts.

 

The people on these forums are more interested in the actual development process, the initial release, as well as post mortems of your games. All I'm really trying to say is that you are trying to sell your game to people who are trying to sell you their game. They are more interested in the development of games and in selling their own games than in buying anyone else's games.

Thanks for your advice. 



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Looks better now (imho).

 

A level selection scene would be nice too.

There is no reason to play again a level you have already beaten.

 

It's a simple casual indie game. 

Your goal is to make me (the gamer :)) to spend a few minutes every day to beat another level.

 

Also it might sound weird but replacing your cars with actual skunks and animals (making everything more cartoonish) could work better.

I understand that making graphics is hard for non artists.

I can't draw a straight line :P



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Also it might sound weird but replacing your cars with actual skunks and animals (making everything more cartoonish) could work better.

I understand that making graphics is hard for non artists.

 

Like ... maybe ... rats? :)



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Like ... maybe ... rats? :)

 

Looks better now (imho).

 

A level selection scene would be nice too.

There is no reason to play again a level you have already beaten.

 

It's a simple casual indie game. 

Your goal is to make me (the gamer :)) to spend a few minutes every day to beat another level.

 

Also it might sound weird but replacing your cars with actual skunks and animals (making everything more cartoonish) could work better.

I understand that making graphics is hard for non artists.

I can't draw a straight line :P

you say exactly what I want   :lol:    




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